Sunday writer’s mic, I’m hosting
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rp-5Xg7br-4
0m06s I haven’t done this joke in ages, tried bringing it back
0m24s Change “hookups” to “partners”
0m48s Get rid of the cosmos part
1m05s Scroll faster when saying “167 reviews” then scroll slowly when talking about “3 tonight”
2m09s Instead of “and how many numbers they get” it should be “and how many women they sleep with”
2m29s It should be “black, white and pink” not “red, white and pink”
2m50s The delivery is all off, but I’m not sure what the right delivery is
Overall: I only did three jokes, and two of them I’ve been working out for a while. I should try the unemployment joke at a real show.
