A Saturday Night Show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=inkodSFUAHc
0m14s That was an improvised opener
0m38s I echoed what the audience member said and then kept going because I didn’t want to get derailed, but didn’t want to ignore them either
1m03s Get rid of the words “it’s like”
2m40s Don’t smile here
2m57s I could’ve paused an extra half second and I think a second rounds of laughs would’ve started
6m25s Pause after “options on the menu”
6m34s It should be “eat the salmon” instead of “order the salmon”
6m49s Get rid of the cosmos part
6m56s I got the words mixed up, “nearby location search”
7m11s Turn all the way to the crowd and look more horrified
8m10s Great response to a random comment
8m20s I felt I went a little far with the “maybe your girl” so then I had to take it two steps further to get away with it
9m08s Try doing some sort of “facepainting sex” motion
9m39s Pause for an extra second after perfect so they clap more
Overall: Very solid set but I need to work on not smiling so much and get the yelp joke even better.
