Another weeknight show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OxQJM0IYgvM
0m50s Look more horrified, open my mouth more, and scan my eyes more after “Igor likes this”
1m27s No need to call out the hating Igor when the rest of the joke went fine
1m40s Good long awkward pause
3m05s I should have my hands specifically different for when I’m doing my mom’s voice and when I’m doing mine to make the difference even clearer
3m32s I should pause after “There were a lot of options on the menu” because that’s a punch line
3m48s An example of why it’s important to pay attention to the audience, calling them out (in a fun, positive way) keeps them paying attention
4m56s Don’t stumble over the premise, be clearer
5m59s Don’t smile at this part
Overall: This was a decent set. The longer than needed pauses really worked well. The Yelp joke still needs some work but is getting there. The shoes joke needs to be a lot clearer at the start, if you have an idea for how to setup the shoes joke, please post in the comments as I still haven’t figured it out.
