This is me hosting the writer’s feedback mic and doing almost all new material
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3IlZTzXQ0mY
0m28s This was a new tag on an existing joke, not bad
0m46s Pause longer
1m02s I’m not sure if this is misogynistic, I think it’s funny
1m39s Not sure about keeping this joke
1m49s I like this one liner and it worked
2m02s Another okay one liner
2m24s I forgot to put in the word “nifty” before “answering machine”
3m07s When I actually respond like this in real life, it gets a laugh
3m31s This joke needs to be punched up or discarded, I think the premise is funny cause it’s true
4m12s Try repeating the fortune a second time but more incredulously
4m22s Another decent one liner, I should expand on it
Overall: A lot of the new stuff has some promise but everything but the one liners need major work. No one joke stood out as being exceptionally hysterical and the craigslist roommate and customer service jokes are in need of the most rewriting.
