Performance Critique: February 4a

The 8pm show

httpv://youtu.be/wHnG8qeRGc0

0m05s Say “thank you” directly into the mic after the applause dies down, instead of during

0m52s I need a better response for when they name a good school

2m19s Weird that “on the plane” got no laugh, try enunciating each word for delivery

6m11s Smile a little more while saying this

9m17s Find a stronger end to that joke

11m53s I could do a more colorful metaphor for “with all the enthusiasm”

12m15s Can cut out the relighting the candle part in a tight set

12m48s Good save at the end, but the end of the song should hit harder

Overall: Good set with consistent laughs but too many of the jokes ended weakly. Rework the endings or end each joke sooner.

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