The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/wHnG8qeRGc0
0m05s Say “thank you” directly into the mic after the applause dies down, instead of during
0m52s I need a better response for when they name a good school
2m19s Weird that “on the plane” got no laugh, try enunciating each word for delivery
6m11s Smile a little more while saying this
9m17s Find a stronger end to that joke
11m53s I could do a more colorful metaphor for “with all the enthusiasm”
12m15s Can cut out the relighting the candle part in a tight set
12m48s Good save at the end, but the end of the song should hit harder
Overall: Good set with consistent laughs but too many of the jokes ended weakly. Rework the endings or end each joke sooner.
