Performance Critique: February 15

Going last on a 10pm show for 8-10 people


0m35s I need a joke before the alibi joke to have something that I’m explaining

1m33s Good job fixing a blunder without breaking character

3m48s It should be “prefer” instead of “like”

4m41s I should mimic the audience’s laugh more often

5m18s Always nice if I can get laughs without talking for this long

7m38s Figure out a shorter term for “life insurance policy” maybe “too bad I knew how much she was leaving me in her will”

12m39s It should be “perfect” not “right”

Overall: Really solid set. I’m working on making the character more playful instead of just straight up psychopathic.

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