Sunday Writer’s Mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TNpZvlggzpc
0m28s I decided to do an old joke but got into it from a different angle
1m27s The last word should be “pronto”
1m51s No need for the word “prolific” as it slows down the joke and is just showing off alliteration without being funny
2m18s Instead of “she” say “my mom”
Overall: The old jokes didn’t really hit and the reworking of the pot joke needs a tighter setup.
