Performance Critique: February 4a

This is an open mic in front of five or six comics


0m06s I got brought up with a “what’s your name again?” so I had to address it

0m49s Reword it to “but the crabs are fresh”

1m14s Keep scrolling my thumb the whole time

1m52s It should be “my baby is pesticide free”

2m03s I made up names

Overall: I could reword some of the jokes but at least I’m not rushing my material when there are few laughs.

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