Going first at a bar show for 10 or so people
httpv://youtu.be/z_ETRXNkieI
1m59s Say “role model” instead of competition
3m15s Better to ease into this bit with continued crowd work if the flow is already interrupted
5m43s More emphasis on second “ever”
6m46s Decent save line
9m00s Strongly consider cutting the unconditional love line, it rarely works
Overall: Decent for going first for a small crowd. Couple of light applause breaks and consistent low laughs.
