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Performance Critique: December 20

This is the writer’s feedback mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gBR8aB7s1VU

0m10s The comic was talking about stealing during his set

0m17s It was freezing in the club

0m40s I wouldn’t usually open with this

1m10s This joke won’t work for a real audience

1m38s Might’ve been better to say “I love the public bus”

1m43s That’s an awkward laugh, not a “funny material” laugh

2m02s Terrible

2m58s There’s potential with the organic baby joke

3m45s True story, but not a funny joke

4m05s This joke is painful to watch, but I’m trying to do new material every week, and I don’t always have good new material

4m43s Funny response, but I think I struck a chord

4m56s If she wasn’t a comic, I’d go into her issues, but I’d rather let it slide

5m38s Do a more manly voice for “Batman says take two”

Overall: Most of my new stuff this week wasn’t that funny. However, the organic baby bit has potential.

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