This is me MCing an open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dKi-zzp1BgM
0m24s I’m not being conversational right now
0m38s No need for the “heaven” tag
0m50s But I’m still gonna do it
1m20s The efficiency joke needs to be tried on a real audience
1m45s I think the “we fight injured children” might work better as a sketch for a bad grammar advertising agency
2m04s That’s just a premise about mutual enemies, I need an actual joke there
2m52s It’s less wordy to say “When drinking gets in the way of your job, so you quit work”
3m09s I need a long pause between “neuroeconomics” and “I don’t know what the hell that means either”
3m32s Going too fast for this whole skit
4m08s This joke needs work, I haven’t been able to practice my material out loud because I’m couch surfing
4m45s There’s a funnier way to get that same house dad point across
5m02s I decided to do one joke I know works to see the maximum laughs I could get, this isn’t really a useful strategy for the end of a set
6m04s I could’ve done this slower, paused and gotten a laugh
Overall: I could’ve probably addressed the comics hating me and waiting for me to get off stage less often. The threesome efficiency joke is ready to be tried on a real audience and the fighting injured children bit needs to become a sketch instead of stand up.
