fbpx

Performance Critique: December 9b

This is for an audience of 7

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uFX2V8F4JhA

0m20s I watched the last two minutes of the comic before me, and came up with a couple of observations to start the set with. This seems to work better than going straight to jokes

1m03s After forty seconds, I go into actual material

2m03s 6 of the 7 audience members were women

3m10s After “we’ll pretend we don’t know each other” I should’ve added “then we’ll meet up around 2am”

3m25s I’m happy the suicide joke is working with women, I was concerned it might not work

3m45s Well that third joke of suicide isn’t working, but that can be fixed

4m36s She said something about pot

4m51s Better response, “I’m not your waiter”

6m25s I think the Russian family joke failed because I mentioned a response of my mom without an accent before getting into the Russian family material, and that confused the crowd

6m31s At least I didn’t go back to Russian jokes after the first part failed

7m30s I should think of different ways of saying “fall in love” so I can keep coming back to it without it getting stale

Overall: I need to be careful about responding as my mom before setting up that she has a Russian accent, or if that occurs, don’t do the Russian accent for the whole set. Also, the first two parts of my suicide joke are getting a strong response.

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

Verified by ExactMetrics