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Performance Critique: August 4b

A lounge show

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BIN1Z3XYj8o

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BIN1Z3XYj8o

0m29s Hold the “what the hell” look for longer

1m12s Figure out a way to stay in the spotlight while doing the act out

2m45s Sell the modeling poses more

3m17s Change “Elton” back to “Jesus”

4m20s Pause for another half second after “Ugh, mom”

5m38s Rephrase from “drag people off the streets” that’s confusing

6m46s Say “he booked me here tonight” more playfully

7m38s This show asks that everyone performs a Haiku

Overall: Decent but some bits hit a lot harder than others, and I should never write poetry.

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