A lounge show
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BIN1Z3XYj8o
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BIN1Z3XYj8o
0m29s Hold the “what the hell” look for longer
1m12s Figure out a way to stay in the spotlight while doing the act out
2m45s Sell the modeling poses more
3m17s Change “Elton” back to “Jesus”
4m20s Pause for another half second after “Ugh, mom”
5m38s Rephrase from “drag people off the streets” that’s confusing
6m46s Say “he booked me here tonight” more playfully
7m38s This show asks that everyone performs a Haiku
Overall: Decent but some bits hit a lot harder than others, and I should never write poetry.