The Sunday writer’s mic
0m54s Add “gets” after “Benflix”
1m20s Yell out “remix”
1m30s Point at someone when I say “you know it”
1m44s Reword to “my rap album drops next month”
2m04s End the sentence with “reviews for sexual partners”
3m14s I forgot to do the second part of the joke with girls being like restaurants
4m06s Have more emphasis on “existence”
Overall: Working out my half polished material, it’s passable but could still use a little tweaking.
The Sunday writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qUdMhTnjvs4
0m54s Add “gets” after “Benflix”
1m20s Yell out “remix”
1m30s Point at someone when I say “you know it”
1m44s Reword to “my rap album drops next month”
2m04s End the sentence with “reviews for sexual partners”
3m14s I forgot to do the second part of the joke with girls being like restaurants
4m06s Have more emphasis on “existence”
Overall: Working out my half polished material, it’s passable but could still use a little tweaking.
