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Performance Critique: April 24b

The 8pm show
1m44s The new version of “cancel relationship” isn’t as good as the old version
2m14s This is a good one liner before the suicide joke
3m36s I missed the hard “v” on “what”
4m02s My accent has been better
6m22s I shouldn’t do these one liners unless the j-date joke kills
Overall: This was pretty strong set throughout, but I need to end on a stronger joke than my dating one liners. Also, I should go back to my original version of the “cancel relationship” joke.

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tAgNc8-pITE

1m44s The new version of “cancel relationship” isn’t as good as the old version

2m14s This is a good one liner before the suicide joke

3m36s I missed the hard “v” on “what”

4m02s My accent has been better

6m22s I shouldn’t do these one liners unless the j-date joke kills

Overall: This was pretty strong set throughout, but I need to end on a stronger joke than my dating one liners. Also, I should go back to my original version of the “cancel relationship” joke.

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