A 6pm show, with four audience members
1m30s Pause a little longer after the fist pump
3m35s I should’ve gone into the brother-sister dynamic more
4m33s Say this more “matter of fact” and less angry
5m21s No need for the word “no”
5m56s Instead of “before going back with her” say “before we get down to it”
Overall: My delivery was good and smooth, and I got consistently small laughs from the tiny audience. I could’ve addressed what the audience member said better, but otherwise it was fine.
A 6pm show, with four audience members
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xHz0-ACq1GQ
1m30s Pause a little longer after the fist pump
3m35s I should’ve gone into the brother-sister dynamic more
4m33s Say this more “matter of fact” and less angry
5m21s No need for the word “no”
5m56s Instead of “before going back with her” say “before we get down to it”
Overall: My delivery was good and smooth, and I got consistently small laughs from the tiny audience. I could’ve addressed what the audience member said better, but otherwise it was fine.
