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Performance Critique: April 12

The 10PM show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z_9JwP8Nj9A

0m33s Good job starting with improvised stuff

3m18s Cut ore rewrite everything between “one mighta been an Android” to here

4m01s Cut the Prussia joke, although the improvised save line was good

5m45s It should be “have doctorate” not “get doctorate”

6m40s Cut or rewrite this joke

7m20s Cut the UFO line

Overall: The new mom rewrite worked well, the rest of the new stuff I tried needs to be cut or rewritten.

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