A music and magic open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yXNirid-O3o
0m28s A failed improvised opening, next time, do one joke, then do the in the moment opening
3m23s Figures that the biggest laugh at a bar show is “they’re not all drunks”
5m32s Fred Astaire isn’t an effective punch line
7m37s Anytime there’s an inappropriate audience member or two, I should stop after every joke and address them with the lesson
9m15s Medicore tag of “not all the white ones are tight” try it once more then cut it
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=090y4CP6dr4
0m18s Instead of “things” it should be “statements”
1m44s Don’t laugh after this joke
2m44s Try to reword it “babies are the new crack cocaine”
3m05s Say “fallopian tubes” not “tubes”
3m58s Be careful not to overdo the “that’s brilliant” statements, but occasionally it is funny
5m03s Don’t laugh after that punch line, unless it’s a really evil laugh
8m06s Strengthen this act out
8m37s This is where I should’ve turned to the kids and said, “Children, don’t hang out with priests”
Part 3
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hu_zc8lLDM4
0m12s I need to rewrite the names joke
1m36s Some audience members finished dinner, I’m pretty sure they weren’t leaving cause of me cause they weren’t listening anyway
3m05s I need to get into this joke better
4m30s I love that I actually started workshopping a joke for a minute
5m01s Pause after “rookie card”
5m26s It should be “dedication” not “determination”
5m51s Explain what Sabermetrics is
6m07s add “per million” after 19.2
Part 4
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uvP208_CwaI
1m15s Don’t do a fake I’m done, just remember that closing bit
Overall: I did another 30 minute set, I was only planning on doing 10-15 so I kept checking my notes, mostly because I wanted to work out newer stuff. People weren’t listening the whole time, but it’s always nice to be on stage for a long time and to work stuff out.
