Sunday writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GtJSsTavCLY
0m18s I’m already really angry and worked up, I need to start this more calm then get excited
0m44s Less words here
1m03s Give more of a “what the fuck” look
1m22s Explain Sabermetrics
1m46s Deliver “everyone knows” like it’s more obvious
2m30s Getting sloppy with words, clean this up
3m10s Be calm on “DNA testing came in” and then get worked up on “and ruined the game!”
3m40s Don’t need the McDonald triad bit
4m28s Great line, doesn’t need two follow up lines
Overall: This is a brand new joke that’s currently 4 minutes, I need to cut it down to 2 minutes, but there’s a lot of potential.
