Performance Critique: April 11

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UWbB0GeqNk0

0m10s Don’t start out so negative

1m52s Rework everything after “Android”

2m35s Keep cutting and rewriting the joke up to here

2m47s At least save lines work

3m42s Change “every time” to “whenever”

4m38s It’s not clear that I’m talking to myself, I need to learn to act better before doing this

Overall: Weak even for a mic. Rewrite and tighten the new stuff, and don’t start out so negative, even at a mic.

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