There were 5 audience members.
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DRiEQLjqdoc
0m37s Very chatty audience members
1m58s Everytime I remember to do the “you turned to each other and said ‘your tubes are kinda large’” it gets a good laugh, but I tend to forget to do this line
2m42s Deliver this line more sarcastically
3m05s My new joke isn’t working, but it is keeping the chatty audience engaged
3m22s Great transition to jump out of the joke and into another one, and it got the audience to quiet down
3m51s I said “myspace” too harshly, it should be delivered much softer
4m05s And I managed to get back to the joke I had originally wanted to transition to from the bagel bit
5m49s There’s some spots where you have to ignore whatever the audience is saying, or the punch line just won’t work
6m07s Stop using the “I wont have kids until I run out of material for jokes” line, or reword it a lot
7m15s The two comparisons of the unemployment office need work
7m48s I missed the word “sign” in that joke
8m15s I think my drinking water on stage makes the set more low key and conversational
8m37s True story, no joke
9m04s This is the first time ever that “it’s all downhill after the stand up” got a laugh… of course, this is the first time that “jumping into an orgy” didn’t get a laugh
9m35s Don’t say the word “bam”
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vlKtGVfWHfw
0m37s I think this is as good as one can do with 5 audience members
1m07s I need to incorporate “if you’re over forty, think of your yearbook photo” into this joke
1m40s The Halloween outfit still needs work
2m28s I should’ve repeated the punch line to test the theory
2m55s I stumbled over my first punch line
2m58s Great comeback from the audience member “how did your pole feel about that”
3m50s I need a better punch line that gets the same point across
4m20s I need a better end then saying the word “home” again
5m25s I love being propositioned on stage
5m35s And misinterpreting it on purpose
6m08s The callback takes 1.5 seconds to get a laugh, I need to be patient and confident when delivering it
Overall: Considering it was just 5 audience members, I did really well. I managed to keep a chatty crowd under control, and got some really big laughs. This was also a fifteen plus minute set, which I don’t’ always get a chance to do. And I like drinking water on stage to slow down my delivery and be more conversational.
