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Performance Critique: April 4

Sunday writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YUagRxpy_VI

0m15s I could have just left it at socks

1m26s I need to add in “I’m making an exception for you”

2m58s I need to say “he’ll be like” before going into it

3m18s Don’t move my head, only my eyes for this character

Overall: I worked out some stuff. I need to mix in dark jokes with normal jokes, or it gets too predictable.

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