Performance Critique: April 3b

The Saturday night show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JCwZIo0ZOs8

2m00s Doing the face and arm motion in the middle there is awkward

3m09s “Hire a hit man” doesn’t work, change the line back to “put a hit on my life”

4m48s The hair gel line isn’t that strong

Overall: Very solid set throughout. (In general, the better the set, the less comments I tend to have.) I got big laughs on most lines and medium laughs on most of the rest. The “hire a hit man” and “power of hair gel” lines need rework though.

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