This is the same place I usually bark at. This was a crowd of 6 people: 4 girls who were great and laughing at almost everything and a couple in their 50’s or 60’s. The wife was laughing but the husband was tough. Of course, being mental like most comics are, I was more concerned about getting the one guy to laugh than I enjoyed everyone else laughing.
0m20s I didn’t smile enough before opening my mouth.
0m46s My tone isn’t as soft as it was in my last performance critique. It sounds like I’m speaking at the audience instead of to the audience.
1m07s I guess I’m not the only one that loves attention.
2m21s They crowd was laughing, so I started laughing. You can’t hear the laughter but I swear it happened.
2m47s A good example of the benefits of calling out the moment especially when you mess up a joke.
4m22s I’ve done this third punch line with and without throwing in the “I’m looking at you” bit, and it gets a much better response with it.
4m38s All that background noise is when the door to the waiting room opens. I’ve gotten much better at waiting for it to close before I deliver a punch line, but I still hate how it messes up my timing.
5m06s That was the only laugh I got from the guy the whole set, but I got a laugh.
5m33s My facial expression has a smile, it should be more shocked.
Overall: Decent set, the group of four girls was laughing at most of the bits. I still stumble over words at times, and I haven’t quite figured out why that happens or how I can ensure it doesn’t happen.
