This was the later show in the same room as above. There was a loud gathering at the bar area of the club which is right outside the door, so every time the door would open, everyone would get distracted, including me.
1m13s Kill “She’s looking mighty delicious.”
1m37s You can hear the people being loud.
2m00s I’m trying to shout over the loud people at the bar at this point. It’s making me go faster than usual because you can hear them if it’s quiet.
2m54s There was no reason to say “Let that roll around” for that punch line.
5m08s I love how the door only opens when I’m hitting a punch line. Watching this again reminded me how annoyed I was after the set.
5m41s Get rid of “the girl who talks about herself non stop” part of the joke.
5m52s Look up at my hand when doing that arc motion.
6m42s The lone highlight of this set was pausing long enough to draw out a laugh.
Overall: The advice I got afterwards was that in these situations (where lots of noise occurs), try to time my punch lines to when the door opens. I don’t think this is a good set to use to evaluate which jokes are funny and which aren’t.
