The 8pm show for very light crowd
httpv://youtu.be/VwJIjMC7T0M
1m21s Slightly weird cause the audience member is too young, but everyone else was a couple
3m20s Try opening my eyes wide for the positive smile
9m47s Mouth “call me” more clearly and slowly
Overall: Eh, even for a small crowd. On the positive side, it looks like I’m having fun the whole time.
The 9:30PM show
httpv://youtu.be/CEJ96vdbqak
0m08s Say “thanks” or something before going into the first bit
0m58s Say “disappointdar” louder and clearer
2m57s Hit “cock blocking” harder
3m26s Pause for an extra half second after “the boy genius”
Overall: Consistent set with one applause break, but the laughs could’ve been stronger.
Going last on a 7PM show for 10-12 people
httpv://youtu.be/ybFlzSoJQaM
2m46s Pause for half a second after “don’t believe me?”
6m20s Roll eyes for longer and bring them higher, so it’s more obvious
7m21s Consider cutting the whole “everyone’s dead” part
8m58s Nice job adding one little line about theatre from listening to the show
Overall: Good for a small crowd
Going up towards the end of the 7pm show
httpv://youtu.be/Ibg7PtP2OF8
0m10s No need to acknowledge that laugh
1m31s Try “go study” instead of “do your homework”
4m34s Open eyes wider
5m29s Try “jerk” instead of “asshole” it’s fewer syllables, same idea
Overall: Slightly slow start but good set.
A 7:30 Show
httpv://youtu.be/xfN9-qGdw14
7m44s Slightly forced in there, be willing to drop that line if it doesn’t fit
Overall: Okay set, not great not terrible. Relationship material did a little weaker than usual.
