Doing a late night spot after the real show ends for audience members that stick around
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qtQ1JoVJV3Q
3m14s Make a better joke if I’m gonna address random audience locations
3m34s It should be “another ton” not “ton”
5m10s Don’t say “cook” twice
6m59s If they didn’t go for the Netflix joke, they won’t go for the Yelp joke
Overall: I started stronger than I ended
Hosting the Sunday writers mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qaCHD9yP2Dg
2m32s This applause break needs to happen within a minute of this joke, not in two and half minutes.
3m37s Hold out the phone for longer
Overall: Slow down on the photo joke and get to the Jewel punchline quicker.
A Saturday 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AhQMuuER4Zw
1m49s Look up a little more
4m03s I need a different punchline
4m25s Say “audience member” not “audience”
5m03s Cut this punchline
6m16s No need for the third “I believe you”
6m42s The funnier full line would be “I think I’d run out of here… with twenty bucks”
7m29s Pause longer between each “nobody believes me”
Overall: Ehh. The Jewel joke is hurting my set.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-6XmLO90UsQ
0m12s The guy before me ended his set by stripping to his boxers, so I addressed it
1m50s Say “the left side of the room in this case,” it’s less words
2m15s Say that line way slower
3m13s “Glamour god bible” is awkward sounding
6m28s It took way too long and not enough laughs to get to this laugh
Overall: Decent but the Jewel bit needs to be tighter and funnier.
A 6:30 show with eight audience members
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F67YbBRseHY
1m36s Such a long delay before they get it
2m27s Awkward wording, fix it
4m19s Reword to “not just anyone can pull of that look: Capri sweatpants”
6m19s Slow down between saying each review snippet and doing the act
Overall: Good set considering it was a small audience and I was interrupted a few times. I did a good job of not returning to jokes when interrupted and just going into a different one.
