A mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6mTef1iWyc0
0m49s And this one liner is officially retired
4m47s Cut the “donate to science” parts
5m16s Keep my gaze in one place after that punch line
7m29s Only do one food reference, then make the second one something else
Overall: Decent enough for an open mic
The late night music and comedy mic with like 6 audience members
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z1xnuB6A-4w
1m56s Great call back to improvised material
5m40s That’s a good line
6m10s Good adjustment to the glass breaking
7m12s I should’ve said, “this is like one of those ink blots”
8m22s That’s funny, I should repeat that
9m25s This is a fun set, I should be like this every time I’m on stage
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uK2HSLyVHTY
4m35s An interruption during a list destroys the punch line
5m17s Good job adjusting to that
5m37s Nice save
6m54s Rephrase to “little known fact, if you donate a corpse to science, they’ll pick up the body”
7m26s I can try to take it even further by adding, “can I borrow some lube?”
Part 3
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hAbg5IZy0tA
0m54s This is a 3am only joke
4m13s Funny
5m03s Good job milking this for literally 12 seconds, I should always milk it like this
6m02s And the bartender has started to play with my camera, bad zooms to ensue
8m05s I can start singing the Destiny’s Child “I’m a survivor” song…
Part 4
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1ayu1LyOWXw
1m08s Good line
4m16s This joke is a lot funnier with a zoom in on my eyes
Overall: I did 35 minutes without any notes and had a lot of fun. Sure I only did like 15 minutes of actual jokes in there, but I was really relaxed and everyone was laughing. I need to learn how to copy my delivery in this venue to everywhere else I perform.
Headlining a show in Staten Island for 8 audience members
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gk8-VhZpPYc
3m27s Good improvised line / flirtation
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cyTUd_u-QP8
1m57s Try making this into a one liner that’s delivered like a throw away
3m07s Kill the “hategasm” line and reword the ending of the joke
3m27s Yes that’s too far
4m40s Try to keep a straight face on that line
7m59s Don’t step on the laugh
Part 3
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=84DL_TSulSs
0m15s If I stumble on a word, stumble for longer to make it fun
3m23s Throw in another line to keep punching it. After “I’m a pimp, I won’t do that” I can throw in “If someone tried that on me, I’d throw her out the house”
4m01s Add “and I was like” before “Everyone in New York”
Overall: Not great, but I had fun with the tiny crowd and did 25 minutes. I need stop over acknowledging when things aren’t going great. And I also need to keep my internal thought processes to myself instead of explaining the psychology behind jokes.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EWsyJITNDnY
0m49s Get rid of “all you need is a bed”
2m27s Kill the “hategasm” tag
5m01s Kill the “lottery ticket” tag
Overall: Working out material at a mic
A lounge show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BIN1Z3XYj8o
0m29s Hold the “what the hell” look for longer
1m12s Figure out a way to stay in the spotlight while doing the act out
2m45s Sell the modeling poses more
3m17s Change “Elton” back to “Jesus”
4m20s Pause for another half second after “Ugh, mom”
5m38s Rephrase from “drag people off the streets” that’s confusing
6m46s Say “he booked me here tonight” more playfully
7m38s This show asks that everyone performs a Haiku
Overall: Decent but some bits hit a lot harder than others, and I should never write poetry.
