An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l3L5hkpjmKw
2m13s This new save line is three for three
5m14s Don’t say “thanks” afterwards if I’m going to say “I’ll leave you guys on this” as the joke
Overall: Working out new and interconnected bits. New Years joke still needs work. And the dogs joke can be expanded.
The 8PM Show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wX_DSqkna9w
0m22s No need to address the intro when the front door stuff got a big laugh (although it was a creepy intro)
4m42s Rephrase this sentence to, “I love meeting new people after shows, especially when they buy my DVDs”
5m30s I can cut words by just saying, “I’d at least check for an adams apple first”
8m32s This joke lost them two straight nights, I’m not yet sure where it goes wrong
9m15s This should get a stronger response. It’s probably because I didn’t acknowledge it getting weird in the room after the million point bonus joke.
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=egr-_ZRPgUA
Overall: Mediocre. I had solid but weak laughs for the first eight and half minutes, then lost them on a joke and didn’t acknowledge it and didn’t fully get the crowd back for the rest of the set because of that.
Going last at a music and comedy mic for the 6-8 remaining people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q5PfyldEg08
1m17s Nice little transition between just talking and doing a joke
7m12s This joke has potential, I should flesh it out more
9m06s Keep selling the heart attack
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jqcAfTrxMno
1m13s It should be “enjoy your trip”
Overall: Decent but not great. The dog joke has potential.
A bar show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f9KDSh_IE1Q
2m17s Good to know that (especially) when things aren’t going well, this line gets a laugh
4m08s Don’t butcher the punch line
4m16s Nice bombing line, it will become a permanent part of the act
Overall: I bombed but I got a new line out of it, so it was worth it. Even if it’s not going well I shouldn’t comment on the crowd’s non laughing, as that won’t get a laugh either.
A 6pm mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PjYO3Gdv2sw
3m24s No need for the neglectful family commentary
Overall: Eh. Working out the New Years joke, it still needs work.
