Doing a spot at my Tuesday bar show for a few people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xTaoTxVtDEQ
2m23s Put “laughed” last
5m08s Shrug first then say the romantic line
7m44s The cops line should be in my normal voice
8m23s The “ooh” should coordinate better with the hand motion
9m44s Don’t say “today” twice in the same sentence
10m22s Don’t break character
10m41s She actually spilled beer on herself, so I did make her “wet”
Overall: Solid set for a small crowd
Going up last 2.5+ hours into the show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GWCyocbK_9k
2m39s Good job being in the moment and calling something out
3m14s Say the line a little slower
4m53s Good end laugh but the lines before this need tightening
At an open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rsSR4rlVTr4
0m39s Change to “I also laughed”
1m02s Sell the misdirection better
2m14s If I lean back, I need to say something in a normal voice before leaning forward again
3m50s End the joke on “I was gonna make it a surprise”
Overall: Decent mic response. Trying out new material.
Doing a check spot
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IyKhqpS4UFw
0m10s Playing off of what the host said before bringing me up
3m22s More emphasis on the second time I say “need it”
Overall: Not horrible for a check spot.
Hosting the Sunday writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JBBHwi6qU30
0m24s Cut or rework everything after thesaurus
0m49s No need for “international disaster”
3m14s Say “fine” before the surprise
3m41s Cut the plus minus line
Overall: Decent for a going for at a mic
