A music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d8Rv_lCjVNM
0m49s Slow down on “take your job” pausing between each word
3m28s Try “I realize it sounds harsh, but I’ll justify it.”
7m01s Find a better wording for all this
7m56s The Shaq line doesn’t make sense
9m18s Reword to “chugs a liter of wine a night, straight out of the bottle”
Overall: Weak for a music mic, but one or two new bits towards the start did ok.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S-ivnqydzcQ
0m55s If keeping the line, change it to, “and I do fractions”
2m58s Change “to someone” to “to your girlfriend”
3m22s Deliver the line more desperately
4m14s Say “sock puppets” instead of “hand puppets”
4m26s In the puppet voice, add “don’t worry, he’s gonna buy your merchandise”
6m40s The wording is closer, but still not right
Overall: Average mic response.
Going last on the 9:30 show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=akrI4XybiPw
4m12s Make the DVD buying more urgent
5m43s Get an actual joke there
8m22s Figure out a way to make that line work
10m48s Change the merchandise pitch
11m04s Reword to “a liter of wine right out of the bottle”
Overall: Great set of 80% new material. Also great first minute just improvising.
Going up about 3 hours into the show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DBsu1P6ogZc
1m50s Don’t go up on “alcoholic”
4m25s A save line should be used by now
4m39s Really should’ve done this type of crowd work earlier
Overall: Weak set. When going up this late, do more crowd work to start.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HWNVkuXO1ak
1m50s Instead of “talk about her” say “that I do impressions of her”
3m23s Push the DVD harder
4m43s Work on this part of the joke, there’s something here
5m52s Do this line way earlier, before the alimony stuff
6m18s Try to find a joke to finish that premise
Overall: Standard mediocre mic response. Working on newer stuff.
