Category: Comedy

Friday night show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mhWdhHThjZg

0m44s I should’ve done the “boop boop” back at the audience member here

1m12s My attitude isn’t sad enough here

2m11s There were literally thirty guys to stage right

3m03s This is where the set starts to go off the wheels

3m26s That was the weirdest start of a laugh with an instant stop I’ve ever heard

5m18s The guy had a neon green shirt on, I wish I thought of this 10 seconds sooner

5m39s And this gets better

5m57s This is a shit show

6m15s Bad joke selection for a drunk, he had a good response though

6m38s That’s awesome telling him “you’re single, right?”

7m17s At least I ended it strong

Overall: This felt like a midnight show at 8pm. I had them with the facebook joke, then the j-date joke got screwed up, the russian family stuff missed and then it turned into audience disruption central. I was able to handle it pretty well (although a little slow on my comebacks), didn’t force my way back into the same joke after a disruption, and eventually managed to get through a whole joke and end on a laugh. It could’ve gone much worse.

An open mic with like 5 comics in the audience

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MHsKTmAyKfA

0m41s Do more of a female voice

0m52s Say the “I’m not a man” line in a more husky voice

1m14s No need for the “and have I mentioned” part

1m59s Put “when I need to get my van repainted” first and then mention “which is every week”

2m57s Say “Yale” before lab technician to emphasize it

3m44s That doesn’t even make sense but it’s funny

4m16s It should be “mmm, you like photos of grown men, huh?”

4m33s This joke needs serious changing

5m01s Put more emphasis on “That’s a lot” before saying “money” under my breath

Overall: Some bits hit better than others, and most need rewriting or other adjustments

A late night music mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=63_noePXmGQ

0m12s I’m talking into a 1950’s style radio mic

1m52s First laugh of the set, nice!

8m41s This is my favorite punchline right now

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0Ik6jDVzEEI

0m29s I could’ve thrown in, “I guess that hit a nerve”

2m10s Pause more naturally, as if I’m gonna continue the sentence

3m48s Try using the mic hand as pulling on her hair

4m58s Do the hand motion on “never”

Overall: It took a couple of minutes to get people to fully listen, but then the set went fairly well. I managed to do a fifteen minute set without busting out any “Russian mom” material, which I wanted to do just to know I can do that.

Thursday night show about 25 people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZgIPKxQsMLQ

0m05s I almost slipped on the wet floor on my way up to the stage

1m30s No reason to acknowledge the “damn” as it ruined the flow, but if I’m gonna acknowledge it, I need to say three funny things about it

3m08s The line “hire a hit man” hasn’t been hitting, try to reword it

6m36s They don’t seem comfortable with the sexual nature of the YELP joke

7m20s When an audience is uncomfortable with YELP, talk about morning after pills, good idea!

7m55s Whoops, why’d I say “babies are dangerous” twice, I didn’t even realize it or I would’ve acknowledged it

Overall: The first six minutes were strong than I lost the audience a bit at the Yelp joke, and then I almost had them back on board during the Plan B material, but I flubbed a punch line.

Back in NYC at a small ten person show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8iEVY0WL3AU

0m21s Wait for all the “ooos” to end before hitting the next line

1m38s Do a bigger face on “Igor likes this”

5m08s This is risky to do five minutes into a set when I’m bombing… then again, it makes it more fun cause you can’t lose a crowd that you already lost

Overall: Pretty weak showing. I lost the crowd at the first line and never got them back. The biggest laugh I got was my save material of following you home.