A late night music and comedy show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TUqjh6hmdCY
0m23s That’s a funny follow up, I think I came up with it on the spot
3m18s This needs a stronger ending
5m59s Maybe I should keep this joke after all?
6m37s Or just keep those first two lines of the joke..
8m31s Say this punch line stronger and more confidently
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fCkDom7MebQ
Overall: The newer material is working but it needs a stronger ending
An afternoon open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OAE2kh65NcU
2m23s Name the homeless guy
4m07s Make this into one, “can I upgrade the contract in two years?”
4m58s Say “that got cancelled a while ago”
6m38s Hit “we were on a plane” a lot stronger
Overall: Worked out some material at a mic
A small show in a basement of a restaurant
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dTBgD7itW-w
1m51s Say “when you throw it” before “the screen breaks”
3m40s No need to say “he literally took of his shoes”
6m42s Start this joke with emphasizing each word, instead of starting it at the third time
8m38s The sand joke is starting to get laughs in more places
Overall: I did mostly newer jokes in front of something resembling an audience and they mostly went over well
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fpGJSxu1Eoo
1m10s I need to think of a way to ask so many questions in a row without it seeming weird
1m31s Get rid of ice cream trucks
2m33s Make the Mercedes line less wordy
3m40s Cut this whole joke
4m03s Say “radar” not “detector”
4m18s Flap my arms once per time that the homeless character talks
5m34s Needs a stronger ending
Overall: Working out newer material, some of it’s better than others
Doing my show in Queens
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6kZPvnt1KOY
1m37s Say “truck” not “van” cause I already said van earlier
4m29s Get rid of the fluctuating god bit
6m16s I’m talking faster than usual cause it’s the only chance to get bar people to pay attention
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xG0aqYb8mKA
1m24s My girl voice needs to stay the same throughout
3m05s If I call that out, I should start doing another joke, not force my way back into this one
4m02s Good little improv line
7m01s This joke needs a different ending
Overall: I powered through a noisy bar set
