At an open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rsSR4rlVTr4
0m39s Change to “I also laughed”
1m02s Sell the misdirection better
2m14s If I lean back, I need to say something in a normal voice before leaning forward again
3m50s End the joke on “I was gonna make it a surprise”
Overall: Decent mic response. Trying out new material.
Doing a check spot
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IyKhqpS4UFw
0m10s Playing off of what the host said before bringing me up
3m22s More emphasis on the second time I say “need it”
Overall: Not horrible for a check spot.
Hosting the Sunday writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JBBHwi6qU30
0m24s Cut or rework everything after thesaurus
0m49s No need for “international disaster”
3m14s Say “fine” before the surprise
3m41s Cut the plus minus line
Overall: Decent for a going for at a mic
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=16_BYFv0p48
0m34s Try pausing after “I also laughed”
7m28s Say “broke” instead of “impoverished”
Overall: Solid set. The mom not scared joke needs a little work but has lots of potential.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dYLtX7q-pxI
1m32s Cut or rewrite the part after thesaurus
3m24s Change the joke
3m40s The dangerous line should be in my normal voice
4m05s I should say “relax” and pause before the cheating husbands part
5m08s Move arm around more during “ooh look at me”
Overall: Average for a mic
