Category: Comedy

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nXuLOXzIGK4

1m38s No need for “I feel that” just go straight to “everyone”

3m07s Try “at least as far as the social security office knows” instead

Overall: Average to mediocre for a mic.

Doing the 10pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NDwVib2eTGY

1m24s That’s a good idea I can reuse: play elimidate from the stage

2m26s Don’t say “the only reason” twice in the sentence

3m20s Good callback to previous crowd work

8m05s First time the friends buying the DVD line got a bigger laugh then the mom line

Overall: Up and down set with a couple of good crowd interactions though.

Doing a set on my Astoria show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m0_QYGW5kJc

2m29s Add a “yeah” before “I don’t know what that means either”

4m55s Say “real tragedy” instead of “true tragedy”

7m30s Call back to “it’s that easy” from the start of my set where I ranted

8m53s Businessman should be at the end of the sentence not the middle

Overall: Good consistent laughs from the small crowd

A 10PM show for 10-12 people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_eYPaNgFSvc

2m35s Good job getting an extra laugh on the shoulder shrug

4m11s I can point without saying “this side of the room” to make it quicker

5m06s Put hand on hip on third “ha”

Overall: Consistent but low laughs throughout, with a couple of big laughs.

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jcGTUm0K7yE

4m08s The crazy character needs to have more lines before doing this bit

Overall: Good for a mic