Performance Critique: June 28b

An 830pm bar show

httpv://youtu.be/BuAdr46qYhI

0m35s Crowd work to material needs a smoother transition

2m45s If a couple isn’t married, it might be funny to ask “why not?”

Overall: Decent but shouldn’t have closed on that last joke.

Performance Critique: June 28a

A 7pm basement show for like ten people

httpv://youtu.be/pbhP_EoTL9o

2m53s Could’ve focused more on this bit of info from the audience

3m42s Good job being in the moment to acknowledge it

4m31s Smoother delivery here

Overall: Ok not great. Could’ve pushed for more crowd work when I found out about the guy not signing a prenup the second time.

Performance Critique: June 26

Going last 2+ hours into a show

httpv://youtu.be/s_QWEqS7iTI

0m40s Have a joke response line for when I learn where they’re from

2m35s Do the wet dream line to a younger audience member before the czar line

8m12s Good job with the crowd work and continuing it for a while after they said something funny

9m40s Open eyes more

Overall: Mediocre material wise, good crowd work wise.

Performance Critique: June 24b

Opening a 4:30pm graduation show

httpv://youtu.be/sJq8AkBxLT8

0m31s At least try a “oh, we used to be neighbors” before going into the bit, or don’t ask the question

1m44s Tighten the commentary about the audience here

6m18s Hit that last line harder

Overall: Strong short set, too many questions of the audience for only 6 minutes though