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Performance Critique: November 7

This is the second show I produced and MCed at Caltech. Here’s my opening of the show:

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f0TEovd0x0Y

0m06s I had to make some general announcements about cell phones and such before starting the show so I decided to introduce myself. This was pretty fun to do.

0m25s There was a bunch of speakers and strobe lights around

0m37s I wrote these jokes an hour before the show

0m54s I started out with three jokes that called out the situation in the room, I think this helped a lot

1m18s Could’ve said something funnier than “he’s gonna be trouble all night”, probably a good time to start talking to him.

2m18s I went along with what was happening and called out the situation of how bad I was looking, if I had just taken my hand away without saying anything else I might’ve lost the audience right there

3m07s I went back to the old version of tubes as this crowd didn’t respond to the overly sexualized version too well last time

3m32s Good job coming back to the high five person

3m49s After watching my last time hosting this show, I consciously decided to do crowd work in between most of my bits

4m31s Some of the crowd work I had to force

6m01s I think this is a joke for comics

6m28s The tears on the map isn’t playing over well with the crowds, I might need to cut it

7m05s Always fun to force out a response

8m03s Taking a longer pause here got some laughs

8m49s Good job coming back to what has already happened in the room

9m04s I should’ve added, “you’re living the Caltech dream”

9m33s Try doing an act out with my hands when talking about “full clown makeup”

This is more from my set in the beginning

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ScfklT_QZEk

0m44s I should’ve asked for his name and gone into it more

1m19s Make more of an emphasis with my hand about my stomach getting bigger

2m11s The new version of my punch line didn’t work out

2m59s The snuggle slut joke didn’t work but you can hear a comedian laughing in the background… I’m going to continue experimenting ending the set with a double call back.

This is me doing time between the first and second comic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yTXEa9ObMps

0m15s I tried referencing one of the jokes the comedian did

0m27s He only stopped grading exams for the female comedian

0m40s This is one of my best transitions from crowd work to a regular joke

This is me doing time between the second and third comic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F9lN28lD30o

0m08s The comic talked about mustard so I added onto that

0m33s The standards drop usually get a laugh

1m00s That joke tanked until I called out the most likely reason they weren’t laughing

Me doing time between third and fourth comic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8RJP2n4HL3Q

0m08s This was in reference to the comedienne’s opening joke of “I can’t believe I fucked Ben for this gig”

0m51s This is a great game I came up with: testing when the audience member should high five me and when he shouldn’t

1m51s No need to go back to “kicking and screaming, see how long you can hold on” if they already groan

2m14s I wasn’t planning on doing another joke, but wanted to bring up the next comic on a laugh

2m16s And that idea failed

My last time doing jokes between comics

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dYVBHNgh2ZQ

0m52s Crickets

1m40s And the audience hates me, they’re at the “please bring up the next comic” stage

2m48s The audience still hates me but I at least brought them back to laughing

Overall: I did a great job of hosting up front. I had topical jokes that addressed what was going on in the room and I did pretty solid crowd work. However, the crowd turned on me for my last two bits between comedians. The lesson is: As the show goes on, do less and less jokes between the comedians. My first two “in betweens” were 75-90 seconds and received well while my last two “in betweens” were 2.5 and 3 minutes. Both of those should’ve been 45 seconds or less.

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