The Music and Comedy Late Night Mic Show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LjUfsJzYUUA
0m16s That’s a great way to be likeable right away
0m33s It was funny when I said it in conversation, but it didn’t work on stage
2m50s This is working really well
3m23s Get rid of the “had to get a drink of water”
4m09s That didn’t deserve an applause break, but I’ll take it
5m09s Get rid of the mail/queue part
5m38s I did the “remix” thing enough times until it got funny
7m28s Get rid of the restaurant like girls comparison
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1SZbZfAyyq8
0m43s Change to “hire a hit man”
3m57s If the tap dancing gets a big laugh, I need a different line than “I’m in the market for a new mom”
4m46s Put more emotion behind “we didn’t even own a chess set”
7m03s I need to figure out a way to do this joke without seeming mean
7m53s The gym joke is much weaker than the rest of my mom material
8m28s This didn’t work cause I had already been a little mean on my last joke
Overall: Really solid set, I just need to be careful about not losing the audience by going too mean without justification.
