Performance Critique: December 11d

Towards the end of an 8pm show


1m30s Move eyes side to side slower

5m03s Instead of “this vicious cycle” say “MY vicious cycle”

5m20s Remember to the put mic stand back in to do a better hula hoop

6m42s Fifth and sixth year should be on the same hand

6m58s No need to point this out when I get a good laugh

8m28s Learn to pause after “sometimes” if a big laugh comes

8m38s Don’t stutter on the line

9m20s Nice improvised line

Overall: Good set.

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