A feedback mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wzR8103xSTU
1m21s Go higher energy
5m17s Cut dog foot and bear urine and knees
5m29s Cut Russian roulette lines
6m29s Change it to piano wire
Overall: Slow start then the second half went really well
Performance Critique: April 20c
A backroom bar show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nzAhuyx4Qi0
1m15s Instead of “arms crossed like someone” try “arms crossed, I guess someone”
2m30s Good improvised moment that I should try to reuse
3m58s It’s funnier if I turn to the side before saying it
5m40s The better line is “if you keep saying wow”
7m30s Cut the dog foot and knees lines
Overall: Mediocre with a couple of big laughs.
Performance Critique: April 20b
A backroom restaurant show for 12-15 people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1wiwK_M7Hf4
0m14s Add “good thing I didn’t mention it”
5m06s Turn to the person who said “oh no” to respond with “oh yes”
6m44s Go harder with the hand motions on “ooooh”
Overall: Decent. I got consistent laughs, with a few big laughs. It didn’t sound like I was having a conversation with the audience though.
Performance Critique: April 20a
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8uZsw_rX64o
2m31s This bit isn’t funny if I look at my set list first, it’s funny because it’s supposed to be random
5m58s Change to “piano wire around your neck”
Overall: Standard mic response
Performance Critique: April 19b
A 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iw5tZqONZlA
1m41s Say “someone” even snarkier
4m14s Good organic call back, too bad it’s not reusable
5m54s Don’t do that line after a good laugh
6m29s Tighten this part up
Overall: Solid set.
