Doing a check spot on the 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YnV0TDQ8l2Q
1m48s Cut the we’re not promoting lines
1m56s Say it in the girl’s voice
2m05s Good quick save after a few lines missed
4m12s Cut “focus on” from the sentence
6m31s I shouldn’t do this joke if I haven’t done the mom act outs to setup the neglect
Overall: Good for a check spot, lost them for 30 of the last 40 seconds cause I went to material that wasn’t justified yet.
Doing a check spot on the 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lTemYGZVTxk
1m12s Say “then I asked” instead of “then I was like”
1m30s Reword to “I wish adults were as honest as kids”
2m34s Acknowledging it’s a clever not funny joke seems to work
3m31s Change “become” to “be”
4m32s Good job dealing with the “ooh” I could’ve gotten to it sooner though
Overall: Very good for a check spot
An open mic with five comics in the audience
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uUl6B7xDMGc
1m29s Say this in less words
1m34s Change “TPS reports” to “meeting”
2m24s Best advice I’ve given
4m49s At least I’m making a bad mic interesting
6m11s Rework the dream line
Overall: I had fun in a unfun situation
Late night music and comedy
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q7xbMCMRedo
1m04s Instead of “pissed off everyone” it’d be even funnier if I said “pissed off the two toughest looking guys in the room”
3m45s Say “talk” instead of “thing”
5m56s Say the sentence smoothly
6m00s Commit harder to the act out
9m55s Doing a joke I haven’t done in a few months at 2am right after waking up from a nap, nice
Overall: Respectable for having just woken up and good crowd interaction at the start
Going first on a 9PM show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8oW8MyWl0O0
1m15s Good job doing a minute of noticing the room before going into the jokes and getting good laughs from it
3m00s Good save line
4m41s Good callback to previous crowd work
5m21s If breaking up the two lines with “you’re like, I do” the second line should be, “I need choking to fall in love” instead of “I need it to fall in love”
5m59s I can add in “this is the only time I can confidently say, mine is bigger than yours”
7m40s Lost them on this joke
Overall: Good crowd work to start and some of the jokes hit decent, but I lost them on the last joke.
