An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v5EBZiXtQ50
1m24s Cut that line
1m49s Change the voice for “hello, how are you”
2m08s Say I hear voices before doing the voice box line earlier
4m15s Sound drunker
6m00s Productive way to get feedback
Overall: Standard mic response
Going towards the end of a 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OnXws3suxQM
0m47s Tighten to “I wish adults were as honest as kids”
0m57s Have her say “I hate your shoes” and me reply “I hate your hair”
1m49s Less words
2m04s And have enough confidence with the crowd work to go right back to it
3m22s Force myself to work in a joke during the crowd work
5m20s At least the new line is hitting
6m48s That save didn’t work, cause they were never having that much fun
Overall: Weak set. My crowd work failed and that led to bits failing. I do better when my crowd work starts as a statement and not a question.
A check spot on the 9pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7bKBZ925u_g
0m55s It should be “about my kid” not “for my kid”
2m12s Address it better, like I have in previous sets
2m31s Change “comedian” to “comic”
5m15s I can tighten that premise into a lot less words
Overall: Decent response for a check spot.
Doing a set on the 8pm show for 10 people, 5 of whom happened to catch my open mic set before
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wN8IoOyZUB8
1m47s Be drunker during the act out
3m18s Do the sound at the same time as the gun motion
7m28s It’s polysci knowledge not history knowledge
Overall: Mediocre in general, good compared to everyone’s set before me on this show.
A writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c5to_wojwbk
1m18s Cut the promoting line
1m48s The new crazy voice
3m05s Good job being in the moment
4m15s Don’t say the uncomfortable line after a big laugh
4m33s The follow home line should be in a crazy voice
Overall: Good for a mic
