Performance Critique: May 23b

Going up 3 hours into a show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lRQI3fRk2eY

1m31s Say “oh it’s okay” to parallel the first part of the joke

2m11s Setup the act out better

4m58s The mic stand should be in a different position

5m11s This should be his first joke

Overall: Good for this late into a show.

Performance Critique: May 22a

Hosting the writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K7-AYUFeqYE

0m57s Before the act out say “that’s like walking into the office like”

1m44s Wipe lips after the lipstick line

2m39s Cut this joke

2m53s Lean into the character quicker and more aggressively

4m53s The mom character should always hold the mic stand with her left hand

Overall: Mostly tried out newer stuff and most of it needs rework or to be cut.

Performance Critique: May 21

Doing a check spot

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=06Axjk00eCw

1m02s Use two hands for the motion

2m02s Acknowledge that one of their friends is clapping about it

5m11s Good job adding the “prove me wrong” otherwise it’s a bit condescending

9m21s Smile at the end of that line

Overall: Great set considering it was a check spot

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