Late night music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BM-XHZ_xRPY
0m39s Good analogy, too bad I can’t recycle it
7m18s Rephrase to “I can’t marry you”
8m04s Cut the “when sixteen” line
8m34s Cut “I did”
8m58s Rephrase to “is my lipstick smeared?”
10m04s Good riff
10m52s Make a more obvious check mark motion
12m45s Say “the glow” instead of “a bit of glow”
Overall: Weaker than usual here, but I had some good improvised lines.
A writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IRwaB4Aivx4
0m27s Try a different sound for the radar
0m42s Do the beeping sound at myself
4m26s Change it to “I can’t marry you”
5m07s The joke needs an end
5m24s Cut “I did”
5m49s Do a better lipstick fixing motion
Overall: Good for a mic. Act outs could be stronger.
A music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=El_a9-Dz2Mw
3m34s Keep my eyes open
7m29s That’s a good random line
7m44s Cut “I did”
9m41s Whisper this line
9m57s Go straight to the mom’s commentary without introducing it
10m52s Hit the line harder
Overall: Good set.
A bar show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8htbFEu6rcY
1m19s No need to address the one weird laugh if everyone else laughed fine
3m07s Change my voice for the drunk voice, slur it or something
6m07s Go into the stance as I smile, don’t do one before the other
6m18s No need for “I did”
9m22s Don’t break into the character there
Overall: Decent.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=frm0v7SqXdE
1m56s Try a different, less high pitched sound
2m19s Sound drunker
3m00s Make a more definitive motion for wiping my lips
5m30s Reword to “that other character Ben, he’s the made up one”
Overall: Weak response, even for a mic
