Hosting the writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rb8HSZoaFVU
4m01s Wipe the lipstick in a more natural motion
5m03s Rephrase to “and already breadline worse than conga line”
5m34s Cut “I did”
5m56s Pivot around the room as the mom character for another second or two
6m39s Pause after “they do”
Overall: Eh. I mostly worked out older bits that I’ve reworded.
Doing checks on the 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_3qsz5gU3Y8
1m28s Sound drunker
2m55s I can have a line like “I guess they were like, let’s try again, we can’t do any worse”
3m21s Whisper “maybe”
Overall: Weak even for a check spot. I needed to be a little more high energy.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1Qpi0Jg8r-o
0m48s Make the sound not as high pitched
1m35s Make the act out move more jello-like
7m02s Do a more convincing lipstick fixing motion
8m47s Move my hands up for “you have that glow”
Overall: Good set with multiple applause breaks but some parts hit a lot harder than others.
Doing checks on the 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PU_zU_N6KcI
2m28s The drunk rocking motion should be more random
Overall: Mediocre even for checks.
The 8pm show, checks dropped mid set
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NqL_pNDBJTw
2m00s The cuddling line might be too early
2m17s Sell the sarcasm harder, “I have no idea why he’s in prison”
3m30s Work on the drunk guy act out
5m20s For the hand motion, I should be between my mom and dad
10m33s Rephrase to “that other character Ben, he’s the made up one”
Overall: I was having a very good set until checks got dropped, at which point it went down to an average set.
