An open mic (with a poorly placed camera)
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u8U2-cg4eqo
2m40s Maybe try “mine stopped after me. I’m the first and last kid, only child.”
4m57s Say “but he has a life sentence” instead
5m23s Cut the riddle joke
Overall: Good for a mic.
Doing checks on the 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G8NnX4a3-Jc
2m26s Make the premise clearer
3m04s Hit the mic harder
4m33s Cut the word “probably”
Overall: I got laughs from the people that were listening.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H5Ex3LahCOs
0m50s Fix the radar sound
1m53s Good improvised line about optimism
3m50s I should’ve gone into save lines two minutes earlier in this set
4m26s Move my eyes instead of my head
6m44s Change the chicken line
Overall: I bombed . I didn’t connect with the audience. There were a few ok laughs but way too many silent spots especially in the first half of the set.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6r7OynFO7tk
0m35s Cut “my parents not your parents”
4m03s Say “how do you think I felt” before the lost luggage line
5m31s Say this line more sarcastically
8m22s Hit the friends line harder and do the hands and tongue for longer
Overall: Eh, consistently small laughs.
Late night at a music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5NJCMlpIacE
1m03s Cut the “my parents not your parents” line
4m04s The stronger response is “so is droning on and on”
5m10s Say “how do you think I felt” before the lost luggage line
Overall: Second half went better than the first half
