Tag: Critiques

An open mic with 8 comics

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rPaQXWvM864

0m56s Hit woah harder

5m59s More sarcasm in the delivery

Overall: Weak mic response but it’s interesting that I’m trying to do a very long minute act out.

The 10pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RcKTSjI8gRo

0m27s Always nice to open by commenting on whatever the host and previous comic said

0m44s Say “fresh breath” instead of “clean breath”

5m28s Try “fun fact” instead of “did you know”

6m08s There’s a window and people were there

9m00s Good job commenting on the sound

11m07s Cut the word “probably”

Overall: Great set, I was in the moment the whole time and jumped between jokes and audience interaction.

Doing a check spot

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m0dpT5a0TdI

2m22s Stumble around more

3m45s This is a reminder to not do long act outs during checks

5m17s If saying someone is my favorite, tell the rest of the crowd to step it up

5m31s Hit “people” harder

6m44s The risk of asking the audience, if they don’t respond clearly it ruins the start of your joke

Overall: Weak even for a check spot. First joke hit and it was mostly downhill from there.

Hosting the second half of a mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rivtJ718KII

1m07s Make a more sudden retching motion

4m06s Try rephrasing to “just thought I’d tell you up front, so you’re less heartbroken later”

Overall: Decent for a mic.

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0cC80jj25jQ

1m24s Stay moving and drunker throughout the act out

5m58s Heavier sarcasm in my tone

7m53s Do a better lipstick smear motion

Overall: Solid set.