Tag: Critiques

An open mic with ten comics

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pNUmv-jiG5s

1m59s Get a consistent sound

3m42s Change the cadence for the women’s prison line

4m22s This needs a different ending

Overall: Eh. Some things went relatively well.

An open mic with 6 comics

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JpAb5alDrDE

1m25s Get a consistent sound for the disappoint-dar to make the callback easier

5m13s Don’t go up on “comedy”

Overall: Eh weak response.

Late night music and comedy

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p6GriqN1V3A

0m48s I didn’t plan to open with this joke, but it was part of the conversation

4m02s Keep my eyes open during this act out

5m12s At least calling out the situation got a big laugh

5m59s Clean up the wording

6m06s Missed an opportunity to address the “oh man” and play along with her

Overall: Eh. I usually do better here.

Doing a longer set for an eight person show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O1xsq84XLfs

2m54s Keep my eyes more open

7m31s Try “probably” means “hopefully”

7m42s I could’ve dug deeper into their first time

13m42s Move hands apart a little slower

17m59s Pause for another second and stare at everyone as the mom character before talking

18m49s Try “you know what mom” instead of “oh mom”

Overall: On an absolute scale this was a bad set, but considering the audience response to the previous acts, I did very well.

Going first at an open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SikuwHTyJ_Q

0m35s Say “fresh breath” not “clean breath”

2m38s Interesting that the act out got more laughs the longer I did it, maybe I should skip to the later half of it

4m45s Word the car line better

Overall: Good for a mic. Keep working on the drunk act out.