Performance Critique: June 13b

Another open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7MT7YeQTPmw

0m25s It should be casting call not casting audition

2m38s Cut a few words out

3m08s Hit the “no” harder

5m50s I mixed up the congress and Hillary lines

6m04s Cut this whole setup

Overall: Weak response, working out newer stuff.

Performance Critique: June 13a

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xfsy2C9Jf6c

3m03s Get the saying right on this, it’s spare, then spoil

3m57s Punchline doesn’t make sense, rework

4m07s Do this one before the chicken one

6m01s Cut this whole premise

Overall: Eh, working out some newer stuff.

Performance Critique: June 12

Hosting the writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iB3yViBxu0E

1m29s Think about adding hand motions to this joke

2m19s Do a hand shaking motion for her

Overall: Eh, got some laughs, did one new joke and two really old ones.

Performance Critique: June 11

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LnBsQyaGhpk

0m47s Good correction

1m39s This sound works better than the previous one I was trying

4m51s Move my eyes more than my head

5m31s Sell the sarcasm of “no idea” harder

8m57s Sound happier about the box

9m24s Nice that the positioning gets a laugh without words

10m20s Do the hands by the face

Overall: Good set with steady laughs and a couple of applause breaks, but it could’ve been a lot stronger.

Performance Critique: June 10d

Doing the check spot on the 10pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4VAqrAbAtRg

0m35s The “beep” and the longer sound should have the same basis

2m25s Good response

5m13s Add “to home”

6m50s Say “That reminds me how I got…” to make it more conversational

Overall: Very good for checks. I didn’t even have to acknowledge that they were being dropped.

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