Another open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7MT7YeQTPmw
0m25s It should be casting call not casting audition
2m38s Cut a few words out
3m08s Hit the “no” harder
5m50s I mixed up the congress and Hillary lines
6m04s Cut this whole setup
Overall: Weak response, working out newer stuff.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xfsy2C9Jf6c
3m03s Get the saying right on this, it’s spare, then spoil
3m57s Punchline doesn’t make sense, rework
4m07s Do this one before the chicken one
6m01s Cut this whole premise
Overall: Eh, working out some newer stuff.
Hosting the writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iB3yViBxu0E
1m29s Think about adding hand motions to this joke
2m19s Do a hand shaking motion for her
Overall: Eh, got some laughs, did one new joke and two really old ones.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LnBsQyaGhpk
0m47s Good correction
1m39s This sound works better than the previous one I was trying
4m51s Move my eyes more than my head
5m31s Sell the sarcasm of “no idea” harder
8m57s Sound happier about the box
9m24s Nice that the positioning gets a laugh without words
10m20s Do the hands by the face
Overall: Good set with steady laughs and a couple of applause breaks, but it could’ve been a lot stronger.
Doing the check spot on the 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4VAqrAbAtRg
0m35s The “beep” and the longer sound should have the same basis
2m25s Good response
5m13s Add “to home”
6m50s Say “That reminds me how I got…” to make it more conversational
Overall: Very good for checks. I didn’t even have to acknowledge that they were being dropped.
