A hostel show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FBDE3_-NQ50
1m00s Lean harder and move the mic more on the punch line
1m15s That’s not what happened, get out of my head
6m08s Try moving just my eyes, without moving my head
Overall: Weak set. The first minute went well until I addressed a joke missing. Do at least 2 or 3 minutes before analyzing/addressing that stuff.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sLtZh4O_esI
0m38s Don’t sound so depressed at the start, even if it’s a mic
1m48s Consider cutting “it has coodies”
3m15s Don’t stutter during the statement at all.
Overall: Average low mic response. I should listen to myself and take a few days off.
Doing a check spot
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BPlchmtOivY
1m07s Say “she’s cute, good job sir”
1m14s First joke missed horribly
2m02s I should know better than to do characters during a check spot
3m55s Don’t say the “that deserved more” line if I’m not doing well
7m05s Roll with the response better
7m54s Stop holding the mic stand for no reason
Overall: Pretty weak, even for a check spot.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=48JkrD4Agvc
2m54s Reverse the words to “she calls me up right after like”
5m56s Say “she’s cute, good job sir”
6m56s Don’t say it so forced, and say it smoother
7m15s Slow down between “P” “H” and “D”
Overall: Really good set with strong laughs throughout. The mom dancing bit was the weakest one, and it didn’t help that I stumbled my words during the setup.
Doing a check spot
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8tjimnw3Zew
1m28s Add “because” before “it has coodies”
5m01s If they agree that quickly, point it out right away
7m38s Do the “wave through” motion for a little longer
Overall: Average check spot, a few good laughs in between being ignored most of the time
